In case you missed, here's PART 1, PART 2, PART 3.
That weekend, Lacey left her house for the mall. She wanted to buy a new dress for her anniversary date with Simon. Without even realizing it, she brought a yellow dress with capped sleeves. When she took it home to show her grandmother, she was shocked at her reaction.
“But Lacey, it’s a yellow dress. You hate yellow!”
“No…I’m not sure I do anymore,” she said.
“We have too much yellow in this house! Those roses have got to go!”
“Don’t touch them.” Lacey looked up at her mother’s picture wondering if she had found it so impossible to be raised by this woman.
“Always looking at that picture when you know you can catch a chill in this foyer,” she shook her head. “Come away.”
“Grandma,” Lacey said, clutching her dress bag. “Why is this the only picture of Mom in the house. She was your daughter. Aren’t there more?”
“No,” she said, a harsh edge in her voice.
“But why?”
“Because I have you. I’ve had to raise you and you look exactly like her. What other reminder could I need? Could I stand?”
“I…I don’t know.” Lacey ran up to her room and threw herself on the bed. Tears streamed down her face and when her grandmother knocked on the door, she threw a vase of roses at it.
“Lacey!” she said opening the door. “What’s going on?”
“I don’t know,” she said, her heart beating hard enough to bruise her ribs. “I just feel so angry.”
“It’s these damned roses! The color yellow…it upsets you, and a yellow rose--that’s much worse!”
“Why do the yellow roses upset you?” Lacey asked.
“Your father used to give your mother yellow roses, back when he was courting her,” she said. She had a blank look in her eyes like the harsh words between them had not been spoken.
“He did?”
“Yes, Rachel,” she said.
“Grandma…I’m Lacey.” She looked down now. It had been years since her grandmother had called her by her mother’s name.
“I need to go,” her grandmother said, and slammed the door.
A rage broke through Lacey as she stared at the broken vase by her door, and all of the roses strewn across the floor. She didn’t know what came over her, but Lacey found herself tearing the petals from the roses all over her room. Pulling petals apart and snapping stems, she unleashed a hurricane of yellow in her room. When no single yellow rose could be found in tact, Lacey collapsed on her floor, on a bed of yellow.
Exhaustion took her immediately into a dream. She could see herself now, five years old, wearing shiny black shoes and a black and white polka dotted party dress. She was walking down a long corridor past all of these grown-ups she had never seen before. No one would make eye contact with her, no one seemed to notice she existed at all. Then the hallway cleared and she was walking alone, trying to find out where everyone had gone. She came upon two tall double doors. One was opened and when she looked in, she could see two coffins, both covered with yellow roses, her parents favorite flower before they died.
A pair of strong hands with long fingernails that dug into Lacey’s skin scooped her up instantly, took her outside, and closed the large double door behind her.
Lacey had been kept from her parent’s funeral.
She woke with a start, yellow petals stuck in her hair, and a few plastered by sweat to her cheek. She had never remembered that day, nor those yellow roses, but she did now. And she understood.
Lacey fixed her hair and put on her new yellow dress. She no longer disliked the color, in fact she thought it suited her quite perfectly. She walked down the stairs to find her grandmother sitting alone in the living with all of the lights out.
“I’m sorry about before, Lacey.”
Lacey held up a hand to stop her. “I remember, Grandma. I remember everything about that day, about the funeral.”
“Lacey, I…”
“Stop. I can’t talk to you now. It’s too soon. I need to go.”
“Is Simon here?”
“No, I’ve got somewhere else I need to be. When Simon comes, tell him to go home.” And without another word, she left the house, crossed from her yard to the next and rang the bell.
Aaron answered the door and smiled.
“You knew,” she said, “you knew all along.”
“Yeah.” He smiled and extended his arm to invite her in.
The End
Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoyed. We'll now return to our regularly scheduled blogging.
Really great story. I like how the color was interwoven into every aspect of it. You are a beautiful writer.
ReplyDeleteWhen she called her Rachel, I thought you might take us somewhere else, like she her mom's soul entered her and her dad's was in Aaron or something. Gah, my mind always goes to the abnormal.
I really enjoyed this - you should do it again ;o)
Frankie oh my! I love it so much.... Wonderful
ReplyDeletethank you ;o)
Erica, thank you!!! And this is so old now. And interesting idea about the souls, my fantasy has a much stronger paranormal element than this story that you'll probably like.
ReplyDeleteSouthern Princess, Thank you sooooo much!!!
Great story Frankie! Love how you the color played a major role. Thank you for sharing--I enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThis was great! Wonderful. I love how the color played such a huge important role in the story- and that Aaron knew all along. You always have a trick up your sleeves!
ReplyDeleteThanks Christine! Thanks sooo much for reading along all week:-)
ReplyDeleteKelly, awww thanks! I'm glad:-)
ReplyDeleteAhh! How have I missed short story week on your blog???? I'm going to catch up right now. What a fantastic idea to break the story up into segments. You are a genius, Frankie!
ReplyDeleteAw, that was really cute. Sorry I didn't comment on the other stories, but I did read them all and they were excellent.
ReplyDeleteOn question though...where was all the making out? I thought this was the story that dubbed you the make-out queen. Or did I get confused. (It's highly possible I got confused.)
Lacey? Where's China?
ReplyDeleteThis chapter was really sad, but good! But I feel like there's something missing, or is it just me? There seemed to be an abrupt change in focus and tone this last chapter. It seems like you went on a tangent related to the color yellow and didn't focus at all on Aaron. Chp 1 through 3 focused a lot on him and in this chp it was all about the color yellow. It was also really sad. :(
ReplyDeleteOverall nice story with great imagery! If you'd have added a small segment at the end dealing with Aaron or something, it would've tied in neatly to the rest. :) Great job! Can't wait to read more of your writing in the future.
P.S. Just so you know, I enjoy rating and reviewing the pros and cons of everything I read. :D If I seem too harsh in my tone at times, please forgive me!
LiLa, thanks, hope you enjoy catching up.
ReplyDeleteShannon thanks, and oh lol, yeah you'd think there'd be more making out---it was the opening scene that had me dubbed, my professor thought it was so authentic and true that I must have made out with enough boys to be bored with that stuff;)
Chris, rofl!!!! I forgot you knew her original name....I switched to Lacey after I got enough complaints over her name.
The Red Angel, that's fine, I don't mind at all, and your opinion is totally valid. I think what happened was for me, the point of the story was her uncovering this block she had over her parents death--being taken from the funeral, she never got full closure on her grief, and her only glimpse of the her chance at that were the yellow roses. Aaron was supposed to be the catalyst for giving her what she needed to remember and move on. He didnt know why he was supposed to give her yellow roses, he just knew he had to--so maybe that answers the question. But thanks for reading!
This was so good! No wonder your teacher read it to the class!
ReplyDeleteHonestly, I love this.
Mariah, Thank you!! :-)
ReplyDeleteMariah, Thank you!! :-)
ReplyDeleteI don't know what to say other than - beautiful. I was pleasantly surprised by the direction it went.
ReplyDeleteSouthpaw, aw thanks! I think thats one of the best compliments:-)
ReplyDeleteI'm so impressed! But I'm also sad since this is where it ends :( You should go back to this story!
ReplyDeletePirate Penguin, thank you sooo much! I don't know, maybe one day, but right now I feel like Lacey is where she needs to be, I told the story I wanted to tell.
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