Thursday, February 4, 2010

Guide to Cutting in Revision

So most of you who read my blog everyday (aka the most awesome people in the world) know that I had made a self imposed deadline for myself to finish revising by New Years Day. A goal I failed in the most epic way possible. Sigh.

One would think that I would have then made my goal a few days later, or even a few weeks later. But it's now a little over a month later and I'm still sitting on those last two chapters.

Why?

Honestly, I didn't want to work on them. Something was wrong and I couldn't figure out what. I've been really happy and excited about every other chapter so far and I am actually excited about my final chapter, but...chapter 21, aka the second to last chapter....it's been making me crazy. And last night when I got down and dirty with it, I finally figured out why.

I won't bore you with the details but basically the tension was gone from a huge scene --like a HUGE scene that's been written and plotted for over 2 years, and I'm about to go and completely cut it.

I've done this sort of thing before, cutting out a major scene and it's a little scary to do, though at this point, I've been so frustrated with this portion of my book that I'm kind of glad to send this scene packing (I do have plans to resurrect it in a way that will make it better---in the final chapter).

But yeah, after I write this blog post, I'm going to go and highlight a whole lot of words and press delete.

And I swear I'm happy about this and not freaking out. Although I know it's kind of tough to do this sort of thing---I think after such a long revision I'm a little desensitized...or I'm so goal oriented that I don't care what scene or character I have to kill, I'll do it to make the book awesome (oh man, editors better love me).

Anyway, since this can be hard to do, especially if your unsure....I'm posting my tips for knowing when to cut.

1) You don't want to work on a scene. Dude, you should LOVE every scene with the fiery passion of 1,000 suns and be excited out of your mind to work on your novel and if you don't want to work on it, then something is wrong with the scene. It has to go.

2) The scene is boring you. You edit a sentence and then you check twitter. You look at half a sentence and wonder if Cake Boss is on tv. If you can't stay focused on your writing, then your readers won't be focused on your writing and this will be the point of the story where they either put the book down, or race through to the end, thus...losing some of your book's magic. And you cannot let your book lose magic--you should be infusing it with magic.

3) You start itching for the delete button. Your brain is trying to tell you something here. Listen to it. If you can imagine your book without a scene, then take the scene out. Don't labor under something you wrote that no longer works or suits its purpose just because its there or you think its going to be more work to rewrite. Just do it. Hit delete, trust me, you'll thank me later.

So I'm off. This is of course now going to mean some rearranging in the last chapter, but that's fine. So hopefully now that I've had this epiphany (actually I've had quite a few, for each thing I need to cut, I've realized something new I need to add) I really hope that this is the week I do finish the revision --which leaves me to do one last comb through of line edits. I've got my fingers crossed.

How about you guys? How do you approach scene cutting and when do you know you're ready to do it? Or how do you convince yourself it's ok?

27 comments:

  1. I haven't had to cut any scenes yet...but I think I'd be a bit more devastated than you! LOL

    Good Luck!

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  2. Great tips and advice - as per usual ;o) I've cut over 8000 words so far and I'm on page 61, so yeah, I have no problem getting rid of the crap.

    "You don't want to work on a scene." Yes yes yes, that's valuable advice! Thanks for sharing and happy cutting ;o)

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  3. These are good tips, Frankie. I have actually been cutting sections of my book recently, too. I feel your pain/relief/anticipation! :-)

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  4. "Dude, you should LOVE every scene with the fiery passion of 1,000 suns and be excited out of your mind to work on your novel"

    Awesome line, darlin'. I need the passion in writing, or it's just a grind. Well, it's still a grind, but at least the passion gets me through it.

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  5. Wow, if you had been planning that scene for so long, it must have been hard to cut it. But it sounds like you did the right thing.

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  6. I was TOTALLY just in this place with my chapter five-- the I know something is wrong but not how to fix it place, that is-- And I ended up cutting the scene too! And rewriting a new BETTER AWESOMER one to take its place. I've done this with about half a dozen different chapters so far, and the book is definitely better for it--of course, all the others I went into KNOWING what needed to be done. This last one just was a stubborn mule. RAR.

    It's okay, now it has goats!

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  7. I just did that in my opening chapter and now the thing MOVES. Your list is great, so I think I'm going to put those bullets (you don't want to work on a scene, it bores you) in my revise folder. Because sometimes, I'll just want to skip over a scene to the next. That should tell me it's a clunker.

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  8. Marybeth, wow really? You're lucky then.

    Erica, Thanks and eeeks you are a master cutter! Wow!

    Shannon, Thanks. Glad to have someone else going through the same thing.

    Simon, hahaha glad you like that line.

    Elie, Yeah, but its ok. I still get to use the scene, it just serves a different purpose now. It wasn't working on its own.

    Amalia, goats! Haha, you crack me up. And yah, it does make your writing sooooooo much stronger!

    Tricia, sweet and yeah thats usually the clue. Especially for me, because I write in a linear fashion. I can't jump around or jump revise. So its always a big signal to me.

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  9. Goats are awesome!
    ...in kind of a creepy-eyed way.

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  10. Dude, if you're wondering if Cake Boss is on, yeah, that's really bad. ;-)

    I feel this. I feel this deep in my soul. I have absolutely no problem cutting anything. I usually copy and paste it somewhere else (in a new doc) before I hit delete though. Sometimes I have good sentences I can use somewhere else.

    But yes. I love the 1000 suns thing.

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  11. Great advice! I haven't gotten to the cutting stage, but I'll stash this away for when I get there.

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  12. Good advice. If you don't like something there's probably a good reason, but that's easier to say from a distance than when I am sitting and working on something.

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  13. Aw, {{hugs}} I'm so stinking proud of you right now its not even funny.

    I think you know my brutal rules on myself (that I must have at least 5 reasons for a scene to keep it) so you KNOW I've cut tons of stuff I love--with one character in particular, who has a tendency to take over everything. He's hilarious, but my book would be 200,000 words if I let him have his way.

    To date, I have cut over 87,000 words from my draft. Mind you--some of those were immediately re-written and replaced, but STILL. That's as many words as my draft! And I'm still going to cut more. So...it's hard. But it's kind of like survival of the fittest. Only the strongest scenes can survive. So good for you! :)

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  14. I've cut TONS of stuff from my WIP and I found it painful at first until I saw how much my plot benefited from it :) I cut it if it just doesn't feel right.

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  15. If your bored with your scene, imagine how your readers feel. These are really good points.

    ann

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  16. Good luck Frankie! Thanks for the tips. I will be starting this process soon.

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  17. I've come to a lot of the same conclusions as you. When in doubt...cut!

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  18. Great tips! I'm rewriting my beginning right now, and a LOT is getting cut...but what I'm replacing it with is so much better/more interesting that I can hardly stand it. I can't wait to get the words out. That's how I know I'm making the right choice (even if moving the scenes to my "deleted scenes" document graveyard is totally depressing.)

    At my writer's conference, Dennis Lehane said over and over to remember that everything you cut isn't dead; it's just sleeping. You can always wake it up from its nap later and use it in another book or story. And even though he's never done that (because, after all, if it wasn't good enough for one book, why would it be good enough for another?) it gives him peace of mind.

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  19. Great advice, Frankie! I find that the hardest scenes to cut are the ones that are good and semi-useful. Sometimes the divide between Useful vs. Non-useful isn't that clear, and it's hard to cut the scenes that are sort of useful.

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  20. I listen to that little nagging voice that says, "what the crap?" when I read through something that doesn't work.
    And if I don't listen to it, eventually my betas will send back my MS with a comment on that scene or section that says, "what the crap?"
    And I wish I would've saved us all some time by deleting it earlier. ;)

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  21. Amalia, lol!

    Elana, yeah....I know that's pretty bad. Glad you enjoyed.

    Jon Paul, yay!! Hope it helps!

    Alissa, ooooh thats a good point too. When you're too close to the project its kind of hard to see that.

    Shannon, awww thanks. Yeah we're very very brutal on our work. Im surprised they don't get up and start fighting already.

    Bethany, I know, it's hard at first but gets easier.

    Anne, yes exactly!!

    Christine, thanks and good luck with yours!

    Anissa, yeah...must cut away.

    Heather, yeah that's true!!! Its not always gone for good. But even if it is, it was still practice. But I do like to think I can reuse a lot of my stuff.

    Sarah, mmmmmmm that's a good point.

    Karen, oooh yeah well if you know it in advance that's always helpful, but sometimes we need the CPS to tell us whats wrong.

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  22. Good tips...maybe I should be cutting my whole WIP then? I've haven't really been wanting to work on it at all...which means, I'm totally missing my deadline. ugh. All your tips makes sense...something to think about when I get to work today on my chapter...I will, I will.

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  23. I had to cut 18,000 words before I sent my manuscript back to my agent! It was painful, but at the same time, strangely liberating. I reworked the entire ending and it came out a thousand times better than it was before!

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  24. Brilliant, my dear! It's so tough to make this kind of decision. To cut something you've invested so much time in feels like going to college and quitting in the final semester (bad analogy, maybe?) Anyway, loved how you've outlined the signs that a scene needs to be cut.

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  25. I love how you describe “how you know when you need to cut”.

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  26. Wow... sounds like you are doing amazing things with your book! can't wait to read it!

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  27. I found your blog via a series of blog hopping slash blog stalking.
    I just started a blog full of my writing woes and I totally can sympathize with cutting things, especially scenes that seemed at one time to be the heart of the story.
    I'm kind of a dork though. I have a pin drive that holds all of my deleted scenes, just in case. Just in case, I don't know. It's weird, but it makes me feel better. I've never had to go back and put any of it in again, but it's there if I ever need it!
    Come by my blog. I LOVE finding and keeping up with fellow authors. It makes this world not so lonely!

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