Now officially it's been Nanorevismo in my world for the last three months...since I finished my WIP this summer, so I'm used to this sort of thing, I roll with it. But because I have a
So this month it's not just revision time, it's Officially revision time-see the captial O?
And so what pray tell have I accomplished so far today?
Ummmm well nada...
But I swear it wasn't my fault and I know what you're thinking excuses, excuses, but see I was babysitting all afternoon and then I had papers to grade (because I'm a very important
But...well I still have things for you. Yay!
Ok after my epic battle with chapter 10 where I pulled a knife (figuratively) and went all pyscho on a scene, not once but twice, I sent the finished product off to my critique partner Kelly and my book dedicatee Atiya to look at.
And lo and behold, they both wrote to me at like the same time and because I am totally shameless and actually admitted to seeing Just Friends more than once, I think I earned the right to quote. Plus Shannon is currently looking at chapter 4 and when that email gets in my inbox, I'll be taking deep breathes again.
So a little Frankie love for just a moment...
Kelly says "Nice job! I say that you won the battle ;) I loved the fact that Ryan and Lilliana...(spoiler warning)"
Atiya says, "Excellent really strong chapter. I'm excited to read 11. I think this was my favorite R and L scene. "
So take that chapter 10! Frankie:1, Chapter 10:0
Although by the time Shannon has crawled out of my avalanche of adverbs, Chapter 10 may be telling me a different story. But just know that right now I have won the battle! Stick it!
Anyway, I'm going to go look at chapter 11 now:-)